What happens when a character refuses to behave or fall in line with the traditional expectations of her community?
Anya Mari—Character, story, and the beautiful trouble of being human
Welcome to Anatomies.
This is the part of the site where I take characters apart to see how they work. Not whether they’re likable. Not whether they made the right call. Only this: can I understand why they did what they did?
That question turns out to be most of craft, and nearly all of why we keep reading.
What we’re actually studying
A believable character needs more than a backstory and an adjective. Every character worth reading needs values, beliefs, desires. A psychology that explains behavior. Flaws that carry weight rather than decorate. Contradictions they haven’t resolved and may never resolve. An inner compass that doesn’t necessarily point where society demands it point. And choices—because choices make consequences, consequences make change, and change is the only thing that ever really reveals a person.
Why chiaroscuro
Chiaroscuro is the painter’s word for light and shadow: a face half illuminated, a doorway with nothing visible beyond it, a single lamp in a dark library. It is also how I want to read character. What she shows the world sits in the light. What she hides, fears, or refuses to name sits in the shadow. The interesting part is always the edge between them.
Why monsters
Because the specimens on this table are going to be witches, ghosts, wolves, and whatever else keeps turning up at the edge of the firelight.
That isn’t decoration. A monster is a character a society has already made a decision about. Call a woman a witch and you’ve classified her before she speaks. Call a man a wolf and you’ve explained his appetite. These figures carry centuries of accumulated judgment about who gets to want things, know things, refuse things. Which makes them the clearest possible way to study how a character is built—and how she’s read.
We start with the haunted and the vampire, then the witch, then the souls, because it’s October and because these mythical beings are the oldest examples we have of anti-heroes and heroines who wouldn’t fit inside somebody else’s story.
The syllabus
- Chiaroscuro Syllabus—you are here.
- Why Dark Stories Stay With Us—the haunted house, the vampire, and the myths we keep returning to: The Haunting of Hill House, Hitchcock, Pandora, and Persephone.
- The Anatomy of a Witch—light and shadow, grounded in my Salem photographs. What happens when the heroine refuses to behave: Margarita, Diana Bishop, and Maria Owens.
- Dead Souls: The Light Still Shines—what survives loss, what love cannot rescue, and how we return changed. Christopher Moore’s Secondhand Souls, Gail Carriger’s Soulless, and Anne Rice’s The Feast of All Saints.
How this runs
A new piece every week or so, each with a short video on YouTube. Some weeks a close reading, some weeks a craft question, some weeks a book I can’t stop arguing with. Certain books will keep coming back—The Master and Margarita, Good Girls Die Bored, Dexter—because none of them belongs to only one question.
I’m always pulled toward the newest adventure, the next cycle, because I don’t like regurgitating old processes over and over, writing, editing or reading the same tripe. I want it raw and real, don’t you?
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First class: Why Dark Stories Stay With Us.
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